Feedback: Draft 2

Title Sequence: Second Draft - Feedback

Before we showed our final draft, we showed our teacher the 2nd draft. She said that she thought that the sequence put too much emphasis on the video clips even though they hard to see. She suggested we make the sequence more about the actual main character by adding in more shots of him and also adding more close ups because they are common in horror films and are good for making a scene claustrophobic especially compared to if we used lots of wide shots.

We were also suggested to enhance the sound. The soundtrack is loud so we can't hear the slamming of the door at the climax of the sequence. Luckily we recorded the sound separately as foley sound so we can make this louder without ruining the other audio.